In a message dated 2/1/2005 9:12:34 AM Central Standard Time,
sylv4700@xxxxxxxxx writes:
people.simons-rock.edu/rlovison/temp/Winter6.html
Richard, I am assuming that by posting your image you want critiques from
the peanut gallery. So here goes one man's opinion.
1) Crop much tighter . . . perhaps just the part of the stream that is going
over the rocks. There are several good photos in this scene and isolating
them might have resulted in more interesting images. Look for the simple
rather than the all inclusive. What patterns might you have captured? Is
there
an emotion trapped in that scene? Is there part of you in trapped in that
scene?
2) Try using a slower shutter speed to really blur the water and show its
movement, rather than kind of showing it. I'm thinking perhaps a 1/2, 1/4 or
1/8.
3) Shoot either earlier or later in the day, when the light is a bit less
harsh. Get there right before day break or right before or slightly after
sundown and capture the array of color produced at that time of the day. It
will
be reflected in the water and will wash across the rest of your scene.
4) In this shot, I might have gotten much lower to the ground, rather than
either shooting from a fairly fully extended tripod or handheld standing up at
eye level.
Thank you for sharing your images and allowing me to share my opinions.
Bill Barber
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