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Subject: [OM] Re: Photos for your critique
From: "John A. Lind" <jalind@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Thu, 12 May 2005 20:29:19 -0500
At 05:43 AM 5/12/2005, Darin wrote:

>Hi John,
>
>I appreciate the tips on different types of film, that is one area I know
>nothing about and just use what ever they have at the local stores, which as
>you suggested I'll probably continue to do until I get better.
>
> > Many of your photographs have a point of interest or subject dead
> > center which can either be too powerful or visually splitting the photo in
> > two.
>
>I get what your saying about the subject being dead center, but could you
>give an example of one "visually splitting the photo", to help me better
>understand?

See this one . . . a photo I did six years ago . . . it is nearly split in 
half by very straight horizon line and contrast of sky meeting turf.  Use 
your hand or piece of paper on the screen and crop about 1/4th of the 
bottom off (removing about half of the foreground grass) and see if that 
doesn't improve its visual impact (not that it has a whole lot to begin 
with; it's not one of my better photos).
   http://johnlind.tripod.com/oly/gallery/om27.html

Regarding the cabin photo:

>I agree, there's a lot wrong with this one, but it was in a remote area I
>wasn't sure I'd ever get back to, so I had to make do with the time of day I
>was there.

The "pros" can spend a day or two to make a single photograph in the field 
. . . waiting for light and sky to be just right.  Sometimes they make a 
"record" or "establishing" photograph and go back at a different time of 
year for a different sun angle, seasonal weather, or knowing that plant 
life will look different in another season.  That said, few have the luxury 
of doing this . . . but knowing about their patience and willingness to do 
this is at least revealing about how they achieve some of their 
photographs.  I waited two years to make one photograph . . . visualized it 
one summer, knew what I wanted, also knew I would go back there for a week 
every year (for other reasons), and waited until the weather provided the 
direct sun and sky I needed for it.  Been known to wait for something . . . 
but that's the longest . . . thought I'd never get to shoot it.  Some of 
the others done near where I live have waited for a particular season and 
conditions that would do something for it to give it more impact . . . such 
as this TOPE photo:
   http://johnlind.tripod.com/oly/gallery/om153.html
I had been waiting since the late summer hoping for 3-6 inches of snowfall 
in the winter followed by a clear blue sky day . . . that never happened . 
. . but the heavy frost and clear sky did . . . so I shot that instead to 
at least seize the opportunity of the sky conditions with the frost.  Still 
waiting for the snowfall followed by a very early morning clear sky . . . 
and if that happens and I can go shoot it again, I will.

>I also agree that I need to do a lot of work on composition. It's
>gonna be touugh training myself to get out of snapshot mode, but well worth
>the effort I'm sure!

Not as difficult as you might think . . . all it takes is consciously 
thinking about it every time you pick up a camera, reviewing things 
afterward, and periodically reviewing various compositional techniques 
until it becomes an automatic habit.

-- John Lind


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