I don't think it needs to be centered but I would try that in trying
various crop arrangements.
Chuck Norcutt
On 12/8/2011 1:34 PM, Chris Trask wrote:
>>
>> I think it needs more depth of field. Fully half or more of the
>> blossoms are out of focus. But maybe it could get by with even less
>> depth of field instead by blurring those out of focus parts even more.
>> My problem with the image is that the out of focus bits are not enough
>> out of focus to keep my eyes from trying to focus them. There is also a
>> vertical light streak at far left. I would agree with removing the
>> blossom at far right but would prefer that it be more fully included if
>> you should reshoot it. There is plenty of space in the frame. Cropping
>> or removal decisions can be made later.
>>
>
> I agree with Chuck on this, and furthermore the photo should encompass
> the entire group of flowers at the end of the branch and be centred. A
> portrait format closeup of a single raceme, such as the one to the lower
> right, would do very well if you can adjust the DOF to fade out the
> background.
>
> Chris
>
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